Unity

Stick to the point! Unity refers to the fact that a paragraph describes one main idea. All the information given in the paragraph should refer to the main idea of the paragraph. Sometimes, people gradually move from one topic to another within one single paragraph.

Example of paragraph without unity

Drinking water is healthy. First of all, water cleanses the body and helps to transport waste products. In addition, it keeps the skin hydrated from within. Dehydration of the external skin can be prevented by avoiding dry environments and moisturising the skin with special products. In fact, 74% of women over 40 use a moisturising skin product at least once a week, while a similar percentage of Americans are chronically dehydrated because they do not drink enough water.

Example of paragraph with unity

Drinking water is healthy. First of all, water cleanses the body and helps to transport waste products. In addition, it keeps the skin hydrated from within. Thirdly, although many people do not realize this, a lack of water causes fatigue, resulting in reduced concentration. Finally, research done by American researchers showed that drinking water eliminates feelings of hunger. Therefore, drinking water is one of the most vital things one can do for one's health.

 

 

 

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